Me and the breeze came to blows last night,
When I noticed him creeping through the mid-day light.
I saw him shimmy along the wall,
Take a fall and commence the crawl.
He took a handful of leaves as he started steppin,
Each foot print neglecting his misdirection.
But I wasn't fooled by his tom foolery,
I said that breeze won't make a fool out of me.
So I rounded the corner and caught him like a cold,
He was bold but to old to make me unfold.
So i choked him out and he died in that place,
Because he moved the hair that sat perfectly in your face.
Beautiful!!! This was very vivid!
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Very nicely expressed! So glad to meet you at Poets United Poetry Pantry. Don't forget to stop by Wonder Wednesday here where we have a Wednesday prompt....and hope to see you return next Sunday again for our Open Pantry! (Our Pantry opens at 1 a.m. Sunday - Central time. If you come earlier, you will see more interaction usually...)
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Awesome internal rhyming. The ending was killer. And clever.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys. I really appreciate the kind words especially from other writers.
ReplyDeletewow, poor breeze! :D
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the read.